My family and relatives (本文为原文，下面有修改稿)

    I have a good family,there is three people in it.There are daddy ,mummy and I.
My father is a business man ,he works hard every day. My mother is an office worker, she works hard too.I am a pupil in the primary school.

    I have two cousins , they are students in the Jiao Tong University. I have one aunt . She was a German translater,and now she lives in Germany.
I have one uncle ，he is an engineer works in a company，he is strong . From liuxuepaper.com.

   I often play with my dog, a cute teddy poodle at the weekend . I am happy , I love my family.

修改稿    My Family and Relatives

    I live in a very happy family. There are three people in my family, my parents and I. My father is a businessman and he works very hard to support this family. My mother is an office lady. Her working hours are from 9 am to 5 pm. I am a pupil in my fifth grade.

     I have two cousins. Both of them are students in Jiao Tong University. I have an aunt. She used to work as a translator, from German to Chinses or from Chinese into German. Now she lives in Germany. I also have an uncle. He is an engineer working in a company. He is very strong.

    There is a cute teddy poodle in my family, and we treat her almost as a family member. I ofton play with her when I have time.

   I love my parents and my relatives, because bring me so much happiness.