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点评一篇GRE 作文习作的英语作文(4)

时间:2010-08-18来源:英语学习栏目:网友投稿英语作文作者:英语作文 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
o;,或integration, fusion, incorporation等词汇。此外,possibly and necessarily是自相予盾的,应改成possibly or necessarily才免强可行。最后,them each应改成each of them, blance为拼写错误,应改成balance

o;,或“integration”, “fusion”, “incorporation”等词汇。此外,“possibly and necessarily”是自相予盾的,应改成“possibly or necessarily”才免强可行。最后,“them each”应改成“each of them”, “blance”为拼写错误,应改成“balance”, 但“balance each other out”也是中国式英语,应改成“to keep a balance between the two”。整句可改为:“As far as I am concerned, however, pursuing differences or individuality and seeking similarities among apparently different entities are not necessarily mutually exclusive, and a combination of both can be possibly or necessarily realized if handled properly, which will considerably benefit our society with an appropriate proportion of each of them to main

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