晚霞是柔美的;晚霞是缓慢的;晚霞是依依不舍的;晚霞还是俊俏恬静的……我喜欢贪婪地阅读晚霞的秀美。(一个“贪婪”就足以看出小作者对晚霞的神往和喜爱，第一小节的开篇就把我们拉进了一个诗意的世界，“柔美”“缓慢”“依依不舍”“俊俏恬静”这些不正是晚霞的特点吗?在小作者的笔下晚霞就是一首诗，就是一个人。)

　　The sunset is gentle; the sunset is slow; the sunset is reluctant; the sunset is beautiful and quiet I like to read the beauty of sunset greedily. (a "greed" is enough to see the author's yearning and love for sunset. The opening of the first section brings us into a poetic world. Aren't these just the characteristics of sunset, such as "soft", "slow", "reluctant" and "beautiful and quiet"? Sunset is a poem and a person in the author's works. )

　　坐在家乡的田埂上，我托着下巴，静静的望着远处的天空。天空中，疲劳了一天的太阳也要休息啦，它将自己的被子缓缓盖上，光芒也不再那么刺眼了，而是变得柔和起来。忽然，天边的一丝云彩遮住了太阳的一部分，仿佛给它披上了一件随风飘逸的披风。但是它似乎不要，努力挣脱掉身上那件‘碍手碍脚’的衣裳。(小作者非常喜欢使用比喻的修辞手法，这样的运用十分恰当。瞧，云彩居然成了一件披风，多么形象啊。)

　　Sitting on the ridge of my hometown, I hold my chin and quietly look at the sky in the distance. In the sky, the sun, tired for a day, will also rest. It will slowly cover its quilt, and the light will not be so dazzling, but become soft. All of a sudden, a cloud in the sky covered part of the sun, as if it was covered with a cloak that drifted with the wind. But it doesn't seem to want it. It tries to get rid of its "obstructing" clothes. (the young author likes to use the rhetorical devices of metaphor very much, which is quite appropriate. Look, the cloud has become a cloak. What an image. )

　　终于，它成功了!

　　Finally, it succeeded!

　　不过，又有一些整块整块的大云彩缓缓的挪着脚步向它而来。这次，它怎么也弄不掉它们了。于是，它俏皮的拨开一点云层，将自己的头伸出来，双眼左看看，右看看，想在入睡前再看看这个世界。它坐在云彩上面，指挥着它们，渐渐向地平线飞去。太阳坐在仙境般的云椅上，享受着，环顾着这个它曾经照亮的世界。现在，霞光只剩下了一小半了，就像是天狗吃月亮一般，一点一点的消失在西方的天空。(这一段就写出了变化来，让这些变化真是地展现在了我们的眼前，景物一但有了变化，便有了生机)

　　However, there are some big clouds slowly moving towards it. This time, it can't get rid of them. So, it playfully poked a little cloud, stretched out its head, looked left and right in its eyes, and wanted to see the world before falling asleep. It sits on the clouds, commands them, and gradually flies to the horizon. The sun sits on the cloud chair like fairyland, enjoying and looking around the world it once illuminated. Now, only a small half of the glow is left, just like the dog eating the moon, disappearing in the western sky little by little. (in this paragraph, changes are written, so that these changes are really displayed in front of our eyes. Once the scenery changes, it will have vitality.)

　　哦，晚霞就像是俊俏的舞女，在云雾飘渺之中展现她的风采;晚霞就像是奢享的皇帝，在金碧辉煌之中聆听优美的旋律;晚霞就像是光洁的玉盘，在云海之中放射它的光芒;晚霞就像是飘逸的丝巾，在风雨之中随意游动……晚霞啊，你是多么的变化无常。呵，一会儿光芒万丈，一会儿又收敛了许多，真令我眼花缭乱。(冷不丁地，俊俏的舞女就上场了，这一小节是全文最华彩的一章，一系列的排比，让人眼花缭乱;奇妙的想象，让人思绪万千)

　　Oh, the sunset is like a pretty dancer, showing her style in the misty clouds; the sunset is like an extravagant emperor, listening to the beautiful melody in the splendor; the sunset is like a clean jade plate, radiating its light in the sea of clouds; the sunset is like a flowing silk towel, swimming freely in the wind and rain Sunset, how changeable you are. Ah, I am dazzled by the radiance and convergence. (coldly, the pretty dancers are on the stage. This section is the most colorful chapter of the full text. A series of parallelism makes people dazzled; fantastic imagination makes people think a lot.)

　　无意中，我喃喃的念起了唐代诗人李商隐的一首千古名诗：向晚意不适/

　　Inadvertently, I recited a famous poem from Li Shangyin, a poet of the Tang Dynasty: the feeling of being late is not suitable/

　　驱车登古原/夕阳无限好/只是近黄昏。多好的一首诗啊，再看看今昔的晚霞，早已涂好了胭脂，准备去参加另一个盛大的舞会了……(末了，以诗收尾，前后呼应，让晚霞更加蒙上了一层诗的意味。全文感情真挚，小作者她真的爱晚霞，因此才能写出这么如梦如幻的晚霞来。相信我们读了之后也都想看看天空的晚霞吧!)

　　Driving to Guyuan / the setting sun is infinitely good / just near dusk. What a good poem! Look at the sunset in the past and the present. I've already put on rouge. I'm going to another grand dance (in the end, ending with poems and echoing back and forth make sunset more poetic. She really loves sunset, so she can write such a dreamlike sunset. I believe we all want to see the sunset in the sky after reading

　　又见圆明园第一次见到圆明园，是在儿时的一个夏天同奶奶一起去的。那是一个老大老大的园子，满眼的残垣断壁。掩在杂草丛中的乱石，上面刻着挺好看的花纹;一些粗大的石柱子，直挺挺地矗立着……不过是一座废墟。这里没有什么好看，可我不明白，怎么在那么多人来到这儿。

　　I also saw Yuanmingyuan for the first time. I went with my grandma one summer when I was a child. It's the garden of a eldest brother, full of ruins. The rubbles covered in weeds are carved with pretty patterns; some thick stone pillars stand upright It's just a ruin. There is nothing beautiful here, but I don't understand how so many people come here.

　　时隔多年，如今，我又见到你了——依如往昔的圆明园。步入大门，顿有一种步入历史陈迹的感觉。最引人注目的是那残缺不全但仍高高挺立着的石柱，从石柱上雕刻着的图案，我看到了一座座富丽堂皇的殿堂;从石壁上黑色的痕迹我闻到了旷日持久的烟火味。我伸手抚摸着她，似乎听到了沉痛的诉说，她把我带到了那烟火漫天的一百五十年前：一伙强盗闯入园中，他们见到那么多奇珍异宝，就如饿狼一般，疯狂抢夺。能拿的都拿走了，不能运走的干脆统统毁掉，一场大火足足烧了三天三夜，于是一座世界珍园便从此失去了自己独有的光彩。

　　After many years, now, I see you again - according to the old Yuanmingyuan. Stepping into the gate, dun has a sense of stepping into the historical traces. The most striking is the incomplete but still standing stone pillars. From the patterns carved on the pillars, I can see the magnificent halls; from the black marks on the stone walls, I can smell the long-lasting smoke and fire. I reached out my hand and touched her, as if I heard a painful statement. She took me to the 150 years ago when the fireworks were all over the sky: a group of robbers broke into the garden, and they saw so many treasures, just like hungry wolves, and they robbed them crazily. All that can be taken away, and all that can't be taken away will be destroyed. A fire has been burning for three days and three nights, so a world treasure garden will lose its unique luster.

　　这园子也似乎在诉说着清廷的无能，诉说着让人感到耻辱的一部任人宰割的近代史;中国人的隐痛一次又一次地在这里被剥揭……

　　This garden also seems to be telling about the incompetence of the Qing government, a shameful modern history of being slaughtered by others; the hidden pain of the Chinese people has been uncovered here again and again

　　园子里栽了许许多多松树和柏树，它们苍萃挺拔的气势给人以极大的鼓舞。

　　There are many pines and cypresses planted in the garden. They are very inspiring.

　　来这里参观的人很多。一位花白头发的老人注视着脚下的石壁陷入了沉思。他那饱经风霜的面庞映出圆明园百十年苍桑的历史。历史留给我们现代人的是无穷的力量和坚定的信念，中国要强大，一个强大的中国是不会被任意欺凌的，作为历史的圆明园，留给人们的思考很多。

　　There are many visitors here. An old man with grey hair stared at the stone wall under his feet and fell into deep thought. His weathered face reflects the history of Yuanmingyuan for a hundred and ten years. What history leaves us modern people is infinite power and firm belief. If China wants to be strong, a strong China will not be arbitrarily bullied. As the Yuanmingyuan of history, it leaves us a lot of thinking.

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