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【习作要求】
请根据下面所给李玲的个人小档案，以My good friend为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍李玲的基本情况。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，体现表中的全部内容，不得少于12句话。

人物介绍：

中文名：李玲 英文名：Susan
性别：女 年龄：15
祖籍：青海 学校：第八中学
年级：三年级,二班
特长：数学、英语 爱好：唱歌、看电视、打排球
优点：友好，善良，乐于助人，学习努力

【作文地带提供参考范文】
My Good Friend
　　I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Li Ling, and Susan is her English name. She is from Qinghai. Li Ling is fifteen years old. She studies in No. 8 Middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Three. Li Ling is good at maths and English. She likes singing and playing volleyball very much. AD:From liuxuepaper.com.And she sings quite well. She likes watching TV, too. Li Ling is very kind and friendly. She studies very hard and always likes helping others. What a good girl she is! I like her!

【liuxuepaper点评】
这是一篇记叙文，内容要交待清楚、全面，要注意中英文的表达习惯，如汉语中年级在前，班级在后，而英语正相反；首尾句要格外留意，要保持短文的完整性。
(1) 格式：人物介绍
(2) 人称：第三人称
(3) 时态：一般现在时
(4) 短语：have a good friend, English name, to be from, No. 8 Middle School, in Class Two, Grade Three, to be good at, like singing and playing, sing well, like watching TV, study hard, what a good girl
(5) 句型：陈述句与感叹句。