liuxuepaper Editor's Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。

作文地带提示,信的内容必须包括：

你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么
为什么想学这些内容
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【参考范文】
Dear leader,
I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses ，such as gardening,cooking, self-defence, nursing and so on.I want to register to attend a course bout gardening ,because I have liked flowers 、grasses etc since I was a little child.

I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature.For one thing ，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college.Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more,I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more.

For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。
Yours,
Wang yue hua from liuxuepaper.com.

【作文地带解析】
本文是书信格式，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应注意如下几点：
先谈自己感兴趣的学科，从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科，这是写作的关键，过渡要自然；
2. 再写自己希望学到什么，要把握实用性。
3. 然后谈出想学这些内容的原因，结合现实，理由合情合理。
4. 在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化，适度增加情节

【liuxuepaper点评】
上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条：题干短，话题一般与学习或学校生活相关，写作形式主要是议论性质，间或插以混合性质，给考生的思维空间大。还有一点，从不给出范文。09年的Guided Writing属于混合性质：陈说+议论。话题涉外，且与教育教学课程相关，是很好的话题。但对于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否过于丰富了些？参看一下惜墨如金的历年上海卷，你就会发现上海卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息，以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个异数了。

作文地带特别提示：该文为2009.上海卷考题，希望大家仔细斟酌其点评以及写作方式。