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假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问，请你根据下表提示的信息，用英语向外宾简单介绍学校近年来所发生的变化，并谈谈你的感想。

注意：
1．词数不少于90。文章的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。
3．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
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I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

请参考作文地带提供范文：

Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.
But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round. From liuxuepaper.com.
I think it’s lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

江苏常州市中考英语书面表达评分标准：

一、内容要点
1．陈述过去环境及设施情况(至少列举两例)；
2．陈述现在环境及设施情况：操场更大、篮球场更多；图书新、品种多；树木四季常青，学校美如花园……
3．发表自己的感想。
二、评分细则
先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。
第五档(15—13分)
    完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯，字数达标，基本或完全没有语言错误。
第四档(12—l0分)
    符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，信息较完整，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档(9—7分)
    基本符合题目要求，表达不够清楚，信息不够完整，语言欠通顺，有部分语言错误，影响整体理解。
第二档(6—4分)
    部分内容符合题目要求，内容不完整，表达不清楚，信息不完整，有较多语言错误，所写内容难以理解。
第一档(3—0分)
    与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语。
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