假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问,请你根据下表提示的信息,用英语向外宾简单介绍学校近年来所发生的变化,并谈谈你的感想。
环境及设施 |
过去 |
现在 |
至少列举两例说明过去情况 |
操场更大、篮球场更多;图书新、品种多; 树木四季常青,学校美如花园…… |
|
你的感想 |
…… |
注意:
1.词数不少于90。文章的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
2.要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
___________________________
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!
请参考作文地带提供范文:
Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.
But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round. From liuxuepaper.com.
I think it’s lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!
江苏常州市中考英语书面表达评分标准:
一、内容要点
1.陈述过去环境及设施情况(至少列举两例);
2.陈述现在环境及设施情况:操场更大、篮球场更多;图书新、品种多;树木四季常青,学校美如花园……
3.发表自己的感想。
二、评分细则
先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次,然后在该档次内评出分数。
第五档(15—13分)
完全符合题目要求,表达清楚,信息完整,语言通顺,语意连贯,字数达标,基本或完全没有语言错误。
第四档(12—l0分)
符合题目要求,表达基本清楚,信息较完整,语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。
第三档(9—7分)
基本符合题目要求,表达不够清楚,信息不够完整,语言欠通顺,有部分语言错误,影响整体理解。
第二档(6—4分)
部分内容符合题目要求,内容不完整,表达不清楚,信息不完整,有较多语言错误,所写内容难以理解。
第一档(3—0分)
与题目有关的内容不多,不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语。
作文地带供稿,希望大家参考之。