自我评价 (self-evaluation) 是一种对自己进行评估、反思和总结的行为，它对个人的成长和发展有重要的作用。一个人如果能够客观地认识和评价自己，就能正确地对待和处理生活和学习中的问题以及和他人的关系，并能扬长避短，让自己变得更好。某校以“正确评价自己”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。

内容包括：

1. your idea about yourself;

2. an experience you evaluated yourself correctly;

3. your understanding of self-evaluation.

要求：

1. 词数不少于80；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

参考例文：

Everyone should have a clear understanding of themselves. As for me, I think I'm a caring and thoughtful girl who always puts myself in others' shoes. I always think about others’ feelings and needs when dealing with problems. Actually, I was a bit selfish two years ago.

I still remember what happened after the final exam of Grade 7. I thought I did very well after the exam. So I couldn't wait to check answers with my best friend. I kept talking about the answers so excitedly that I didn't notice the expressions on her face. Suddenly, she shouted at me and ran away. Just then, I realized I was not caring and thoughtful enough. It was always one of my shortcomings. Therefore, I made up my mind to improve myself. Later, I said sorry to my friend and began to think more about others. So I have more close friends.

From this experience, I realized the importance of self-evaluation. We should have a proper and objective evaluation of ourselves. Not only can it help us a lot with our studies and lives, but it can also make us learn from mistakes and get better and better.

[总体分析]

① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍你对自己的看法；

第二步，讲述你正确评价自己的经历；

第三步，介绍你对自我评价的理解。

[亮点词汇]

① put oneself in others’ shoes 设身处地为别人着想

② deal with 处理

③ make up one’s mind 下定决心

[高分句型]

① As for me, I think I’m a caring and thoughtful girl who always puts myself in others’ shoes. (宾语从句；who引导的定语从句)

② I kept talking about the answers so excitedly that I didn’t notice the expressions on her face. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)

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