“From today on,I will...;I will...;”或者“I plan to do it as follows...”那叫“我的实践”吗?
顶多算是“我的希望”或“我的计划”。这样写就跑题了。可见,切题不仅是指全文,三段中的每一段也存在是否切题这样一个问题。有的考生这样写第三段,就基本上可以说是达到要求了:
As a university student,I pay much attention to my physical exerciser.I do some swimming in Summer and some skating in Winter,I often play badminton and tennis.I m also careful with my diet.In a word,keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously.
(二)有人可能会问:知道了这几项原则,上了考场我为什么还是写不出来呢?这就牵涉到英文作文的两大考试目的了。
英文作文到底要考大家什么?我们认为,主要考查你的两大方面———思路表达与英文水平。
有的考生一拿到作文题常常会抓耳挠腮,不知道该写些什么,肚里空空如也,这叫做:“没有思路”;也有的人,思路倒有,只是“英文水平”较低;当然,更有一些人“思路”没有,“英文”也不怎么样,要拿高分,其难度就可想而知了。下面,我们分别来谈谈“思路”与“英文”这两件事。
大家知道,到了考场上,作文的第一件事是———思路。有些人,没有思路,只好随心所欲,信手写去,写着写着,自己也不知道写到哪里了。这种作文,难道会条理清楚?难道会中心突出?又怎么能做到干净整洁,不乱涂乱画?因此,拿到作文后的第一件事就是要审题并列出一个提纲。这就好比家中要待客先列出一份菜单一样。菜单列好后,按单去把菜买好,这就叫“素材”,再炒好端上桌,就叫“英文表达”了。
没有菜单,再高明的作家也会“巧妇难为无米之炊”的。列“菜单”,即作文的提纲不必过长,寥寥数语,中、英文皆可。万一上了考场没有稿纸,把准考证翻过来,只言片语可矣!
例如作文“Electricity and Our Daily Life”.①Electricity is essential in our daily life.②If there were no electricity,...③Therefore,...
【Outline】
①电的用途:提供动力/照明/日常生活。②假如没有电:生产/生活,都会受到影响。③因此,我们要节约用电。
Electricity is essential in our daily life.It runs the machines in factories;It starts the vehicles and light the streets and rooms.With it,we can watch TV,listen to the tape recorder,cook meals or store food in the fridge.In a word,it helps us a lot in our daily life.
If there were no electricity,all the machines would stop working.At night,it would be very dark.We would have to wash our clothes with our hands.Students would use oil lamps to do their homework.We would live as our ancestors did centuries ago.
Therefore,electricity is very important to us.Our life cannot go on without it,not to mention the construction of our country.Our country is short of electricity,now. So,everybody should try to save it.
(三)提纲列出之后,下一步就是用比较标准的英文将你想要说的意思表达出来,这就需要有较好的英文基本功底:包括单词、句子结构、语法、词组等等。下面,大家先看两篇作文,其思路还算清晰,文章比较切题,层次也很合理,但是,单就其语言文字方面,有哪些主要问题呢?【例】 Traffic in Big Cities英语作文
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