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2004-2009高考英语满分作文及名师评析(7)

时间:2010-08-27来源:作文地带整理栏目:高考英语作文作者:作文地带 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意: 1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。 2、 词数

  请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。

  注意:

  1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。

  2、 词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

  3、 参考词汇:阳光体育活动::a national student sports program;

  教育部::the Ministry of Education

  Good afternoon, everyone,

  The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10:00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

  The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

  In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

  Thank you!

  【作文地带点评】

  本文的结构十分明晰,同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段,前两段叙述,后一段发表观点,典型的作文结构。在句式使用上,作者用法多样,使用了独立结构和虚拟语气,十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

  积累卡片

  好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

  好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

  教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动,能够健康地活50年。

  评析:advocate,其后接虚拟语气,可以省略情态动词。

  2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records.

  如果我们不进行运动,我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

  评析:虚拟语气。

  【重庆卷】

  【试题回放】

  据报道,7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中,美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy收到一封慰问信,就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

  假如你是新华中学的学生李华,请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信,主要内容包括:

  自我介绍

  得知的情况

  表示鼓励

  打算为她做什么

  祝她早日康复

  注意:

  1. 信的格式已为你写好

  2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

  3. 词数100左右。

  4. 请在答题卡上作答。

  Dear Amy,

  I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I'm sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I'm sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.liuxuepaper.com

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