《大学时光》表现出作者浓厚的幽默风格，热情洋溢的植物学老师和“我”这个教不会的笨拙学生可谓栩栩如生，跃然纸上。而语言方面，则渗透m作者深厚的语言功底。比如，开头两句都是并列句。首句的第一个并列分句“I passed all the other courses that I took at my university“是含定语从句的复合句，然后话锋一转，使用了but连接的并列分句。第二句的第一个并列分句“This was because…”是含表语从句的复合句，然后是。nd连接的并列分句。而第三、四句则成了简单句。错综的句式和精到的用词值得朗读、背诵、借鉴。
【小试牛刀】请用英语写一篇150词的短文，描写某位老师给你上过的一节课。
【范文】
A Lesson l will Never Forget
I´ll never forgei one lesson my Chinese teacher gave me several years ago.
That was the last class before we graduated from junior middle school. T~ie moment my C.hinese teachery,tepped into the classroom, we all stopped chatting. "Children," she said,“I know what you are thinking a—bout at this moment. You´llleave this school tomorrow, so I don´t want to teach you anything. However, I´dlike to say something to you ftom the bottom of my heart.´7She said a lot about our future. Each of us lis-icned attentively as if we: were flying in the sky with our mind wandering freely.I still remember one sentenceshe said-"Look forward and. be happy.”
Thrce years have passed by. However, when l meet difficulty today, I.always remember that sentence“Look forward and be happy.;´It seems to be a beautiful star, glittering in the sky.
【点评】 虽然全文没有太精彩的情节和华丽的语言，但朴实中表现出语文老师这节看似随意的最后一课给作者
的影响。 首段：one lesson改为a lesson更为自然，因为one毕竟是强调数量的。 第二段：Th。moment这一连词用得好，表现了老师一进入教室同学们的表现。as if和介词with的复合结构表现出作者的语言功底。
第三段：pass by表“路过”，此处用pass即可。现在分词glitt ering显得颇有动感。
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