Topic:

Some people said that younger people should could hold important positions in the governments. Others believe that it is not proper. Discuss both sides and give your opinions? 有人认为年轻人应该在政府中担任要职，有人反对，讨论两方观点，给出你的意见。

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Perhaps no issue has led to such an end debate as to whether it is preferable and feasible to inspire the youth to embark on some crucial jobs in the governments. Some people argue that youngsters are supposed to be encouraged to take up some administrative tasks. While still others believe that it is far from wise to allow the young to hold some imperative posts in the governments. Before voicing my opinion, this essay aims to investigate the debatable issue from both sides.(84)

* 作文-地带点评：雅思写作为规定时间内的八股式论文写作，写作预测已经是越来越难。该题目要求平衡分析年轻人该不该在政府中担任要职，属于新题出现。很难在考场写出个性的首段首句的情况下，就直接写出争议的焦点，转述双方观点，表明写作意图，但是首段是亮剑，依然要在模板句式的后面体现词汇的丰富性，比如important = crucial = imperative; hold = take up = embark on; positions = posts = administrative tasks.

Granted, those who hold that important government works cannot be undertaken by younger people is never with their reasons to a certain extent. For a start, so immature and inexperienced are the youngsters that they are more likely to commit blunders ranging from making wrong decisions to failing to fulfill their duties properly. To be more concise, citizens' interest will be jeopardized and a nation's prospects will be put at risk provided that young several servants account for the vast majority of administrative authorities. Furthermore, in comparison with the young, it is easy to find numerous examples to prove that senior officials enjoy more superiorities in terms of policy making, crisis management and booming the national economy. (116)