Today is 61 Childrens Festivals, my early gets up, eat a meal, went happily going to school, to class when, I see inside opening TV, run to class hastily inside, sit quietly to look, not a little while, the teacher calls us to move the chair, we began to ...

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An unforget summer holiday How time flies!I'm fifteen years now.During the long time,there was one thing that I will never forget. When I was 9 years old,my family took the bus to my grandparents' . In the bus,I had a good seat.At 7:30,the bus came to a v...

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六一儿童节这一天，小杰的爸爸带着他在动物园度过了一个愉快的儿童节，今年的儿童节，你又是怎么过的呢？ 今天是六一儿童节(Today is Children's Day) Today is Children's Day.My father takes me to the zoo.There are many kinds of animals,the tigers, the pandas,the lions, the elephants,the...

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捉鱼(Catching fish) When I was 7 years old, my mother took me to Shenzhen in Spring Festive. There was a beautiful garden near where we lived. In the garden, there were full of green trees, flowers, soften grass, and a little pond with pretty fishes in it. ...

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作文地带和同学都看着我们欢笑，向着我们鼓掌。我们的舞跳完后，徐甜同学为大家演唱了《太阳雨》主题歌，她用自己甜美的嗓音响亮的独唱来欢庆六一。轮到器乐表演了，我们走上台去吹竖笛，曲目是《粉刷匠》、《牧童》、《春来了》。...

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My Mother isa kind and gentle woman. She is always very gentle. She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school. I have one brother and two sistets. So she gets four children in all. She gives us every comfort. We all love her and she lov...

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My imaginary pet would be a South China Tiger.Its name would be Angle.It would be fierce.So,it would be a leader of all animals. Every day,it would eat much meat like fish and beef.It would run quickly like wind.We would play together.I wouldn't keep it.B...

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作文地带点评：Cell phone It is reported that China owns the most cell phones in the world.Cell phones play an important part in our daily life.Whenever we can contact people .It is very convenient.It also has many functions.Such as:sending short messages,taking ...

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作文地带 counter 评分93分 级别优秀 批改 1． green grassplot sprinkied with colorful flowers 这里有一处笔下之误。应将sprinkied 改为sprinkled. (点缀) 。绿色的草地被美丽的小花点缀着，好一派美景！ 2． rivers are polluting with dangerous chemical 应将polluting改为being polluting. 意思...

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作文地带点评：Life in the future The life in the future will be more better than now. First ,people will have they own robot in the home.So they will not do them homework.Because the robot can do it. Next ,people will live to be 200 years old . People will live ...

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