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Nowadays many families have only one child,and they are the apple of their parents' eyes.There are also many problems.In the past , children could go to school by themslfves .They usually helped their parents do some housework .when they grew up ,many children had very good independence and habits.But now children can not go to school without their parents' help.After school ,they need their parents to pick them up too .Everything needs their parents. When they grow up ,the independence is very bad. For example,they cannot help do much housework and so on .
点 评文章中出现的问题说明小作者的英语功底不是特别扎实，希望以后多练习英语各方面的能力来巩固自己的英语基础。高二到高三还有接近两年，好好努力，定会有进步!
给 分 理 由- 词语运用错误，如：nowadays,take away, homework等，扣除2分。
- 句子结构不清晰，重复啰嗦，如：Also appare have many question .They also usually help their mum do some homework . 扣除3分。
- 谓语动词时态错误，如：grow, help等, 扣除1分。
- 单词词性错误，如：badly.扣除1分。
- 标点错误，扣除1分。
- 句子中第一个单词大小写错误，扣除1分。