赞成迁出：反对迁出：

　　1.游客多，交通堵塞

　　2.郊区环境好1.建于1906年，中外闻名

　　2.搬迁易造成动物死亡

　　注意：1.词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。

　　2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3.参考词汇： 郊区—suburb

Dear Editor,

　　Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　[名师点评]

　　这篇文章写得还是比较精彩的。要点表达得完整而准确，清楚展示了主题。先提出了文章的主题，进而列出了赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后又给出了反面的观点，论据十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后连贯。

　　【北京卷】

　　【试题回放】

　　第一节情景作文(20分)

　　美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

　　注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。

　　2.词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,

　　I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

　　While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

　　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Hua

　　[名师点评]

　　这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感；第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。

2004高考英语满分作文

　　【全国卷I】

　　【试题回放】

　　假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。

　　比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台liuxuepaper.com