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历年高考英语满分作文名师点评及英语答题技巧(9)

时间:2010-07-31来源:网络整理栏目:网友投稿英语作文作者:英语作文 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
Dear Sir / Madam: I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to

Dear Sir / Madam:

  I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sport during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

  Yours faithfully,

  Li Hua

  [名师点评]

  这篇文章写得非常流畅,把握了所有要点,同时以“我”为中心,详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合,以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当,这种表现就比较充分,具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。

  [全国卷II]

  【试题回放】

  假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求,写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

  注意:

  1、字数100左右

  2、可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯

  3、开头语已为你写好

Dear Bob,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. It’s open from Monday to Friday, and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00 p.m.

There are many books available in our library, dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

Due to the library, we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Hua

  [名师点评]

  本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动,意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主,兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式,作者极力推荐自己的图书馆,这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢?

  【安徽卷】

  【试题回放】

  假设你是李华,作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年,寄住在Mr. Brown家里,刚回到国内。回国后,你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家,因此给他写了一封信,请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下:

u  感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助

u  一本英语词典忘记带回

u  词典是美国老师送的,非常珍贵

u  词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

u  邮资自己付

  注意:

  1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

  2、可适当增加细节,使行文连贯

  2、参考词汇:邮资-postage

Dear Mr. Brown,

I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country, I’ll show you around in turn.

However, there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much, for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom.

Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.liuxuepaper.com

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